Pocketknife

Thanks, everyone. Something I've noticed upon reading back through this poem is the fact that the cheek reference doesn't need to only be the one on your face. I think it reads powerfully either way. Let me know what comes up for you when you read. Now, back to writing.

Powerful write, G. Donald Cribbs! This is personal and moving. You did a awesome job at bringing out such a dramatic scene with a detailed and effective, but brief story-line. Thank you for sharing with us!

Thank you, Lee. I have been working on my trauma recovery for 40 years, since the age of 4, when my childhood ended. I appreciate you taking the time to read and share your thoughts.

Thanks, gentlemen. I changed the title back to Pocketknife. Thoughts?

Powerful wording

Awesome

All of the pieces you write... wow. It's impossible to read them without a strong emotional reaction. Powerful. You are truly courageous.