Much have appeared to the world None have appreciated into word Perhaps "Much" should be "Many" All do what I crown, owe to myself Is this you should own, to be yourself! What is "this"? It speaks of myself, and then transistions to 'you/yourself.' This is how it actually reads: All do what I crown, owe to myself is this you should own, to be yourself! Eventhough it is broken lines, it does not make sense. Line breaks are important for pause, but the next line has to make sense with the one preceeding it. World and word do not rhyme, breaking your rhythm. Should probably read: All do what I crown, owe to myself And that/this you should own, to be yourself! I suspect that your words would flow in your native tongue, but the broken english distracts. I am sorry Priyanka... Dispite your good imagination, the poem sounds somewhat forced.

In the zone!

I forgot to mention that I notice a kindness in your poetry.

I think that Bouquets would sound better than bunches. Bouquets is more Sophisticated, bunches is more playful. So, I guess it depends on what you want to get across. Also, prizeless should be priceless. Good imaginary...

A couple of rhyme issues.. for me that is. trees/ladies, Cadence could make these rhyme, but it doen't flow that way. know/hold Makes me think of the vietnam war.

Take it over the top in pain, irony.. Are you broken? Do you see the end? Are you dying inside? Show the disregard with more visuals. I’m all just for show as you enjoy that green full of blood flow. "?... I don't get this line"

Sometimes the flow requires short with the long sentences. Like different waves in the middle of the ocean, and between them is the right kind of pause.

Thumbs up!

I never try to mess with someone's artistic license, although I do see a couple of spots where you could tighten this up and fix the rhyme. Fortunate for some, they can build art with words that otherwise would not make sense. A true poet can say cat and have it mean a bus ride. Word building and placement is the art of poetry and so far it appears you apply that ability, but it is good to reign it in a little sometimes and be a little more direct. Telling them what your thinking and then lead them to an abstract conclusion.

looks like the work of a true wordsmith to me. Good use of visual words too. Nice!