My words are often veiled Find their place on paper My motive to be impersonal Often meet with failure As the thoughts come tumbling forth My innermost emotions are revealed Like a rainbow after a rainy day
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We found the poem "Thoughts" by Susmita Mukherjee to be a beautiful and thought-provoking piece of writing. It speaks of the struggle between wanting to remain impersonal, and the deep emotions that can often be revealed as thoughts come pouring out. The poem conveys a deep sense of vulnerability in these moments, and speaks to the power of expression in our lives. I appreciate the careful word choice and imagery used in this poem, which further highlights the inner struggle of trying to express ourselves without giving too much away. Overall, this is a powerful poem that deserves appreciation.