May 12


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Edited: Aug 26






O’ Mother , let me offer you my garland of water petals

Which I interlace with my deepest pain

Soul flowers which blooms in May summer

Yet sympathy , I grieved , couldn't knit chain of white lilies.



O ‘ Mother let me offer you my solemn love

Which I collected in my little palms , with my hardest spirit

White flowers which powerfully denotes your purity and sacredness

Yet today , I have no courage to grieve with such traditional flower .



O’ Mother let me offer you bouquet of carnation, on your grave

Which I pluck with my blood and flesh to grace thy honour

Those red flowers which bloom, to calm dead soul in heaven

Yet, , today I preserve my heartache journey to reward thou glory.


Mother !

O ’Mother let me offer you chain of gladiolus

Which I weave with my love and compassion

Flower which embraces elegance and grandeur of your divine face

Let me keep your head up , with your beautiful representation



O mother ,

Let me bestow my delicate mourning , with strength and unique character

Which I bequeath with pearls of roses , chrysanthemum and sapphire of hyacinth

Forget me not , for I tend to shy away from my sensitive emotions

Mother , O mother let me weep silently with my half heart , on your lap of grave!



Poet’s Thoughts:

The poem which is written to mourn on the death of her beloved mother. A little daughter who craves to offer handful of flowers on her mother’s grave because of traditional and customary rules . Weeping daughter tries hard to reach her mother’s soul and allowed to attend her own mother’s funeral . The poem depicts the harsh nature of society on side , on the other love of her mother after her demise and pleading Godmother let her meet with her mother’s soul at grave to offer her funeral flowers , pay her tribute and imprint an emblem of remembrance in loving memory of her mother.




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This poem is heartfelt and a great example of the connection between a daughter and her mother. It uses symbolism with the indication of the flowers, reflects love, and embraces pain. The pain of losing someone as irreplaceable as a mom is a difficult reality to face. Than you so much for sharing!

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