Thank you

clever piece, well written

Well written, can feel the pain bleed through the words

brilliantly put, that should be on every writers wall to look at when they doubt their work!

Thank you both for the kind comments.

Really good piece, i feel it. a longing to belong in this world

Wow. that was an intense piece in a really good way, moving. seriously good writing!

You deserve the limelight, the stage to share my love my truest friend so i draw my heart on the page words of love will never end

This was observational, have spent a bit of time with people who have been in this situation, but not personally.

Thanks for all the comments, this piece was purposely left quite ambiguous, i feel you can read your own meanings into it.

Heart filled with helium, floats so high two hearts side by side, soaring by under blue skies so perfect and clear our hearts will always hold dear

Thank you, means a lot

Very thought provoking, and well written. sometimes we need to show darkness to find light and to help others in need.

They bring us so much joy, unconditional love. enjoy the memories.

our pets are like family, ive had dogs all my life, having to let them go is one of the hardest things in life, but better to spare them pain. A beautiful piece, thanks for sharing it with us all

A simple formula, often made complicated the maths works, trust the equation 1 + 1 = love, me and you you made it 1 + 2, those numbers couldnt add up to a something true You took the numbers and messed around, added digits where they shouldnt be found all those times you lied, used my number as a free ride, as you fooled around 1 + 1 wasnt enough for you, couldnt accept just one heart so you ended up 1 + 0, alone, as you lies did fall apart

This road, long, destination unknown, a world to explore a journey, adventure, through new lands, new plans where the sun lights the way, a beacon of hope, so much never seen before we take to the floor, our feet beat our path, with you at my side, hand in hand the road long, the destination isnt important, the journey is our story each moment, perfection, the chatter, the joy, my perfect companion there will be forks ahead, rivers to breach, you at my side, will be filled with glory so lets walk this road, destination untold, journey long or short, enjoy with abandon

Well, some of this ive lived, some ive known through people ive met in my years. I like to be able to give some possitivity to the situation that a lot of people live in, we can overcome so much with some help, a bit of belief and a lot of love

Our hands interlock, as we walk side by side enjoy the feelings as we take in our stride forever together, as always should be our hearts beat in perfect symetry As the sun dips low, our love just grows into night, our time, to dance unopposed feel passions inside, bloom like a flower to love forever, each and every hour

Great work as usual Samantha.