Thank you Realistic Poetry. I once heard a quote that inspired my poem reflecting on my past struggles which said, "It was a lesson, not a life sentence." We truly can build on our experiences and go forward. :)

That is a heart wrenching piece. I could feel her pain as you were describing it. Well done!

Thank you :)

Well said!

Wow, that is powerful! Yes, take one day at a time...

Nice, definitely song material.

Hauntingly beautiful.

Thank you Realistic Poetry for your heartfelt encouraging response. It's my hope that the poem will help others somehow, somewhere. I have a lot poetry written about my painful experiences over the years, it helps me process my pain. If my words help another, all the better. I will try to share more of my work here, as my busy work schedule permits. Thank you so much for this platform which allows us to have a voice.

Thank you C Z for your insight and kind encouraging words. The weight of the pain still chokes my soul, but I press on. Some days are better than others.

Thank you.

Thank you Lee for validating my pain. This poem was published last year in the book Removing Chains of Child Abuse. I was honored, and hope that it helps others know that they are not alone.

Thank you for giving us a place to let our voices be heard.

I love it, nice work!

It is such a beautiful tribute. I'm so sorry for your loss.

Lovely!

A very moving piece Lee. I think many of us can relate.

I could imagine the music playing as I read your poem. Nice!

Thank you so much...

Writing helps me process Lee. I'm still trying to come to terms with my childhood.

Thank you Jackie.